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Living forever
wouldn't be so bad
If pigs could fly
And cows were mad

If buttercups rained from the skies
If people danced
Not asking why
Living forever
wouldn't be so bad

The sky would have to burn
with love
And dragonflies would dart
above
A thousand messages on
my phone
And friends would keep me
unalone.

Living forever....
I could get used to the idea.
©2008-2009 ~Empress-of-the-Dead
:iconempress-of-the-dead:

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now this one...i really dont know.

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:iconjezebel-polizia:
Well that's new.

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TEA!
:iconget-shiny:
living forever would not be that bad...i really would want buttercups to fall from the sky ^^ that could keep me entertained for a long long time ^^

i read all the other poem that you posted. ^^; i'm a lazy person right now...so i'm just ganna tell you what i think of them now. i love the rhymes you came up with. they were easy to read and easy for me to follow. they flowed really nicely. but the one thing that made them all really good was the fact that i could find truth in them.

:sun:

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keep me wanting
keep me wishing
dangle me on a wire
dancing on the edge
ecxited, on fire

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